Magical Monday 58
It was love at first sight.
He strode toward me, his eyes shining with purpose and determination. Even if I had wanted to resist, I couldn’t have. I was helpless, frozen in my transparent cloak clinging to me.
He whispered to the cashier, nodding at me. Her lips curled and she nodded. Hurrying over, she forced me up, dabbing my petals with tissue.
“He’s the one,” she whispered. “The one you’ll be happy with.”
Crammed into a vase with a pink ribbon, I peered out of the center of a cluster of roses and daisies. The breeze grazed the tips of my petals, the warm sunshine bathing my upturned face.
“Honey?” He crammed the cell phone in his ear, mumbling into it as he strapped me into the front seat, propping up a box of caramels and a loaf of bread around me. Though I wasn’t sure what security they could provide, I appreciated his concern.
I think.
“I’ll be home in fifteen minutes.” The door slammed, his voice warbled outside of the glass windows. ”–yes, I got the bread for dinner. I know it’s my favorite. Chicken lasagna.” The smile in his voice beamed throughout the small car. ”I love you.” Turning the key, the car lurched forward.
In no time at all, the car slowed, crawling into a darkened box. The man unbuckled his seat belt, gathering me in his arms and fishing his keys from the ignition. Nestled against a crisp cotton shirt, I was swept into a home of simmering marinara sauce and jaunty jazz. I heard the cry even before I saw her.
“Darling! You shouldn’t have!” They kissed over me, their lips inches from my blushing petals. Whisking me away, she placed me in the center of the table, surrounded by plates of steaming lasagna and crisp salad.
“Oh, they’re perfect darling. They’re just perfect.” They kissed again, her fingers lingering on his stubbed chin. ”Kids! Dinner is ready!”
The table quivered with every step as they thundered down the stairs, the water sloshing in my jar.
“All right, lasagna!”
“Hey, dad! Great flowers!”
“So pretty!”
“Aren’t they?” The mother beamed as they slid into their chairs, rubbing her husband’s arm. ”Things couldn’t be better.”
Beaming in the center of the roses, in the circle of smiling faces and heaping plates, I couldn’t help but agree.
It was love at first sight.
Stay tuned, Invisible Friends! We have a delectable ode tomorrow!














September 26th, 2011 at 5:19 am
What a clever and beautifully written piece, this is wonderful!
September 26th, 2011 at 6:28 am
Love your magical Mondays dear Duckie and I need some magic specially today!!! have a nice Monday!! and a lovely weekend! gloria
September 26th, 2011 at 6:57 am
This was sweet. Sometimes, I would love to know what flowers really think and I think you nailed it. How was your weekend?
September 26th, 2011 at 7:55 am
I stopped by from SITS. I’m a recent transplant TO Texas. It’s like a foreign country here.
I love your style of writing
September 26th, 2011 at 8:52 am
Luv at 1st sight is a very good thing.
September 26th, 2011 at 9:13 am
Aw, very lovely and wonderful!
September 26th, 2011 at 10:24 am
That’s a sweet story.
September 26th, 2011 at 11:45 am
That is so cute! A lovely way to say it with flowers….literally!
September 26th, 2011 at 11:46 am
What a stunning story
Thank you for your lovely comment xx
September 26th, 2011 at 12:44 pm
So sweet
September 26th, 2011 at 1:54 pm
What a fun story. So sweet.
September 26th, 2011 at 2:06 pm
Beautiful, sweet tale! Can’t wait to see how it turns out! xo style, she wrote
September 26th, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Cute story…a very creative idea! Happy Monday to you!
September 26th, 2011 at 6:09 pm
This is wonderful. I loved it.
September 26th, 2011 at 6:36 pm
how cute!! happy monday!!
September 27th, 2011 at 4:55 pm
Very cute! Love the perspective!
September 28th, 2011 at 11:38 pm
Wow! This is so cute! The descriptions and wording is BEAUTIFUL! I have a very hard time with words. I read thing like this and I wonder, “How do people’s minds work like this?!” English was always my WORST subject and lowest grade. I am a very visual thinker. I guess that would have to do a lot with the difference in people like you and I! =) I have crisp, clear pictures of my thoughts, but it is so hard to find words for them! I love this piece!